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Nice drawing, but it doesn't feel right,
somehow. I'm not sure how to make
my point without seeming rude. But in
this case, I get the feeling that I'm
reading a pointer towards a clever and
amusing cartoon on someone's site,
rather than reading an idea and then
being referred to an illustration. |
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I guess I'm saying that I would have
liked the idea to be in the writing more
than in the illustration. |
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I thought the idea needed an illustration
to convey the iconic impact that would
otherwise not have been apparent with
a written description alone. Visual
imagery is important to me. |
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Neat concept and illustration [+], but the angle of the oar looks a bit steep - might be easier to row if it enters at the base of the conning tower? |
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//to convey the iconic impact that would
otherwise not have been apparent with a
written description alone.// I agree. But
my point was that the text on the HB was
more of a pointer towards a illustration
than an idea which was clarified by an
illustration. Keep the illustration but make
the text more descriptive. Anyway. |
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Row row row uboat fiercely 'cross the lake. Chasing all the other punts, then pass out from the gas. |
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